What’s Happening with MILK RUN?
Here’s the latest on MILK RUN. Lots and lots of changes! Also, recommendations on new SciFi books with an unusual twist. Check it out.
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MILK RUN Update
Hi All! It’s taking me a bit longer to complete the next scene chapter for my new military SciFi novel MILK RUN. That’s because, unlike the other scenes posted, this is literally a brand new scene. The earlier scenes were created about six years ago. But I got writer’s block and things got real busy at the office. So, I stopped the project. Picking up where I left off, those scenes required less rework and…
Finally . . . Story Plot Hole Filled In!
. . . . and it’s smooth! Check out the changes made to resolve the story plot hole in this Military SciFi- MILK RUN!
SHOCK WAVES in space
It’s been a busy and fun summer that resulted in this story climax as we near the end of the MILK RUN military SciFi story with shock waves in space. Check it out!
MILK RUN Beta Readers Link Posted!
Become a beta reader for MILK RUN a new SciFi book that will soon be a hit! I just posted the first scene at the StoryOrigin. Check it out and let me know. Thanks!
It Was Tough To Write
This next chapter scene was hard to write. Yet, for some reason, I keep doing it! It represents yet another low point for our hero in the story. Now normally, one would expect to see just one low point in a seven-act story where the hero/heroine feels all is lost. But for MILK RUN, I felt a double low point is necessary: one to represent a career low and the second a more personal low. The…
August 22, 2022 Beta Reader Review Update
Got lots of good feedback from my military SciFi novel MILK RUN beta readers on the idea to change the 17th scene (Standoff!). The change happens when our hero, Captain Toby Louis is relieved of command on the destroyer class spaceship, USS Princeton, by his second in command, Commander John Emerson. Some might call it mutiny. Others might call it saving the ship, its crew and mission. (Hey! That sounds like a nice tag line,…
Filling in the Story P(l)otHole!
Here’s what I did to fill in my story’s plot hole!
RED ALERT, RED ALERT!
This is one of the most dreaded things that can happen to an author!
My Writing MILK RUN and Two New Books for Springtime Reading
First of all, a BIG THANK YOU to my MILK RUN Beta readers for your reviews, comments and encouragement. YES, your feedback has been very helpful . . . to the point that I have tweaked/reposted a few scenes based on your comments. MILK RUN is currently in the “creation” stage as I write one scene at a time based on an earlier outline that follows the seven basic elements of a classic three…
