End of the Summer Update

Been a while since my last post. So here is the latest:

I’ve completed the first round of beta reader reviews and made plenty of changes based on their feedback. Many thanks to my first round beta readers.

Along with the changes comes some new tag lines. Check them out below and let me know what you think by clicking the comment link below. Tell me which one is your favorite and why?

  1. Here’s a space battle where the crew is fractured, air is finite, addiction is spreading, and hope is a thin duct-tape patch.
  2. How do you fight a war and love a pacifist with a telepathic link to the enemy?
  3. Can our young captain complete his mission and save his fiancée too?
  4. Mutiny, sabotage, and an ex-fiancée hooked on the enemy’s telepathic drug is the surest way to lose a four-dimensional space battle.
  5. MILK RUN is a frothy milkshake blend: one-part cosmic drug addiction; one part conflict between war and peace; and one part generation gap clash; a dash of horror with parallel dimensional space battles as a bright “red alert” cherry on top.

I’m finishing up with a professional editor to tidy up the changes from the beta reader inspired updates. A lot of nit picking going on to clean up the manuscript and make it ready for submission (yea, gonna try that route and see what happens.)

I created a new book cover. What do you think?

What’s next? Nip, tuck and submit. At the same time, I’ll get a second round of beta readers for their review. After all, this is an everlasting process. Click here to get in on that second round of beta readers.

That’s it for now.

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