Been a while since my last post. So here is the latest: I’ve completed the first round of beta reader reviews and made plenty of changes based on their feedback. Many thanks to my first round beta readers. Along with the changes comes some new tag lines. Check them out below and let me know what you think by clicking the comment link below. Tell me which one is your favorite and why? I’m finishing…
Category: Military science fiction
Have a Happy Holiday!
While at 4500ft heading back to Raleigh,
I saw this guy. Guess what . . .
Another Year
It’s been another year since my last post. After putting MILK RUN down for a while, I’ve returned with a fresh set of eyes to continue the project. I just completed a round of major changes with a professional editor. The story remains the same. But corrections were made to: remove obvious typos and punctuation issues; smooth out the prose; get rid of story distractions, repetitions and those awful dense paragraphs. Yep a general…
Where The Hell Have I Been??
It’s been over a year since my last post. Let’s catch up on the latest writings. Also, here’s a chance to win a free copy of my SciFi book GOD GAMES.
SHOCK WAVES in space
It’s been a busy and fun summer that resulted in this story climax as we near the end of the MILK RUN military SciFi story with shock waves in space. Check it out!
Story Climax- You Were Saying?
Question for you authors and readers. Do you consider the term “helmswomen” derogatory? Do you consider romance in a military SciFi story bad or distracting from the action? I use both in my military SciFi story- MILK RUN!
Finally . . . Story Plot Hole Filled In!
. . . . and it’s smooth! Check out the changes made to resolve the story plot hole in this Military SciFi- MILK RUN!
Filling in the Story P(l)otHole!
Here’s what I did to fill in my story’s plot hole!
RED ALERT, RED ALERT!
This is one of the most dreaded things that can happen to an author!
What’s Next?
Finishing up this military SciFi is harder than I thought as I go through my fourth major revision of the end. But, it’s getting there and a recent flight over the Smoky Mountains helped.