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June 16, 2023June 16, 2023 James

Finally . . . Story Plot Hole Filled In!

Beta reviewer, Chapter Summaries, Military science fiction, Military SciFi, Milk Run- a new book, My Self Publishing Journey, Scenes from the Book, The Writing Experience, Uncategorized
Finally . . . Story Plot Hole Filled In!

. . . . and it’s smooth! Check out the changes made to resolve the story plot hole in this Military SciFi- MILK RUN!

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NOW ON SALE!
An Upside Down SciFi Retelling of the Greatest Biblical Story Ever Told about a
secret contest in a tech-utopian Heaven between a scrawny secular Yahweh and a brawny evangelical Lucifer. 

Can a geeky scientist save his soulmate, Heaven and Earth?

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Hi! I'm James

The purpose of this blog is to share!

Share my experiences as I write and launch two new SciFi books: GOD GAMES and MILK RUN.

Share the characters, scenes, backdrops, the underlying science behind the stories and even what I have learned about storytelling.

Share some of the ups and downs of self-publishing.

And as a way to give back to the writing community, I’ll share with you some interesting books by fellow authors that I have discovered along the way and some general thoughts on what's going on across all SciFi medias.

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