Question for you authors and readers. Do you consider the term “helmswomen” derogatory? Do you consider romance in a military SciFi story bad or distracting from the action? I use both in my military SciFi story- MILK RUN!
. . . . and it’s smooth! Check out the changes made to resolve the story plot hole in this Military SciFi- MILK RUN!
Here’s what I did to fill in my story’s plot hole!
Hello all! It’s only a few hours before we watch the NYC ball drop and march on to 2023! There were plenty of ups and downs for us all. But let’s face it, you wouldn’t know you were living if it wasn’t for all the pain and strife that somehow fades to happiness, love and peace. So, my wish for the New Year is that we all work to find common ground with those around…
What would someone do if they began to read your book in the bathroom? Here’s an opportunity to get some feedback on your book. Take the 227 challenge and find out!
Check out this new chapter/scene posted for MILK RUN a military SciFi!
What do you think of this rough illustration showing damage to the USS Princeton after a space battle with a Telrachnid gunship?
I finally posted a new scene for MILK RUN. It follows scene 18 (The Brig) after Captain Toby Nathanael Louis, ends up in the brig after his second in command takes over his ship. Scene 19 shows how he regains control of his ship, the USS Princeton.
Here’s version two of this chapter/scene and a quick comparison to that old WWII submarine movie that inspired me… RUN SILIENT RUN DEEP! What do you think?
First of all, I want to welcome all the new folks who recently indicated an interest in MILK RUN! Thanks and I hope you enjoyed the beginning of MILK RUN. Just to review, MILK RUN is a military SciFi novel about a young captain fresh out of space command school on his first mission as captain of the USS Princeton, an old destroyer class spacecraft. But what our hero thought would be an easy first…