While at 4500ft heading back to Raleigh,
I saw this guy. Guess what . . .
Category: Beta reviewer
Another Year
It’s been another year since my last post. After putting MILK RUN down for a while, I’ve returned with a fresh set of eyes to continue the project. I just completed a round of major changes with a professional editor. The story remains the same. But corrections were made to: remove obvious typos and punctuation issues; smooth out the prose; get rid of story distractions, repetitions and those awful dense paragraphs. Yep a general…
Story Climax- You Were Saying?
Question for you authors and readers. Do you consider the term “helmswomen” derogatory? Do you consider romance in a military SciFi story bad or distracting from the action? I use both in my military SciFi story- MILK RUN!
Got A New Story Hook!
Work continues on MILK RUN now that the plot hole has been repaired . . . and guess what . . .
Finally . . . Story Plot Hole Filled In!
. . . . and it’s smooth! Check out the changes made to resolve the story plot hole in this Military SciFi- MILK RUN!
Filling in the Story P(l)otHole!
Here’s what I did to fill in my story’s plot hole!
RED ALERT, RED ALERT!
This is one of the most dreaded things that can happen to an author!
What’s Next?
Finishing up this military SciFi is harder than I thought as I go through my fourth major revision of the end. But, it’s getting there and a recent flight over the Smoky Mountains helped.
New MILK RUN Scene Posted
The first Act 3 (beta) scene has been developed drawing us to the conclusion of my Military SciFi MILK RUN! Check it out and let me know your thoughts.
Inspiration to Write!
Here’s something to inspire and juice up your writing creativity. Worked for me! Tells us what works for you!