While at 4500ft heading back to Raleigh,
I saw this guy. Guess what . . .
Another Year
It’s been another year since my last post. After putting MILK RUN down for a while, I’ve returned with a fresh set of eyes to continue the project. I just completed a round of major changes with a professional editor. The story remains the same. But corrections were made to: remove obvious typos and punctuation issues; smooth out the prose; get rid of story distractions, repetitions and those awful dense paragraphs. Yep a general…
Want A Beta Reader Copy?
Please note that I’m not looking for paid beta readers. Also, the first round of beta readers is full. But, I can include you on the second round after I make changes to the manuscript based on received feedback. So, please complete the form below to receive what will be an improved version of MILK RUN after the New Year. Thanks for your patience. Please complete the form below to receive a free beta copy…
Where The Hell Have I Been??
It’s been over a year since my last post. Let’s catch up on the latest writings. Also, here’s a chance to win a free copy of my SciFi book GOD GAMES.
SHOCK WAVES in space
It’s been a busy and fun summer that resulted in this story climax as we near the end of the MILK RUN military SciFi story with shock waves in space. Check it out!
Mid August 2023 Update
So, for this post this is what I’ve got to say . . .
Story Climax- You Were Saying?
Question for you authors and readers. Do you consider the term “helmswomen” derogatory? Do you consider romance in a military SciFi story bad or distracting from the action? I use both in my military SciFi story- MILK RUN!
Got A New Story Hook!
Work continues on MILK RUN now that the plot hole has been repaired . . . and guess what . . .
Finally . . . Story Plot Hole Filled In!
. . . . and it’s smooth! Check out the changes made to resolve the story plot hole in this Military SciFi- MILK RUN!
Filling in the Story P(l)otHole!
Here’s what I did to fill in my story’s plot hole!