Tag: Military Scifi

James

Another Year

Beta reviewer, Military science fiction, Military SciFi, Milk Run- a new book, The Writing Experience

  It’s been another year since my last post. After putting MILK RUN down for a while, I’ve returned with a fresh set of eyes to continue the project. I just completed a round of major changes with a professional editor. The story remains the same. But corrections were made to: remove obvious typos and punctuation issues; smooth out the prose; get rid of story distractions, repetitions and those awful dense paragraphs.  Yep a general…

James

New Scene Posted! Scene 19 – Be Careful What You Ask

Beta reviewer, Chapter Summaries, Military science fiction, Military SciFi, Milk Run- a new book, Scenes from the Book, The Writing Experience, Uncategorized

I finally posted a new scene for MILK RUN. It follows scene 18 (The Brig) after Captain Toby Nathanael Louis, ends up in the brig after his second in command takes over his ship. Scene 19 shows how he regains control of his ship, the USS Princeton.

James

Make A MILK RUN Scene Ending Choice

Chapter Summaries, Milk Run- a new book, Scenes from the Book, The Writing Experience, Uncategorized

First of all, I want to welcome all the new folks who recently indicated an interest in MILK RUN! Thanks and I hope you enjoyed the beginning of MILK RUN. Just to review, MILK RUN is a military SciFi novel about a young captain fresh out of space command school on his first mission as captain of the USS Princeton, an old destroyer class spacecraft. But what our hero thought would be an easy first…

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